I see fireworks in celebrations. In birthdays we have cake. At halloween I go trick or treating. At christmas I get presents. On Friday it was the schools birthday. I saw a cake. We had party hats.
"I am really proud of my writing because I tried hard to make it look nice and neat. I used the word cards to help me spell the words correctly. Next time I could try even harder to write them neater."
2 comments:
Wow! You have described lots of different celebrations, great writing Dylan! I love all the words you have used in your brainstorm. Remember to use your brainstorm to help with your writing.
Wow Dylan this is so cool! I love all of the words you have used, they bade me happy to read, and I love that it is in the shape of a birthday cake, super awesome!!!
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